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Open Poetry #4

An Obsession Percieved

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 1999-12-12 08:54 PM

Unto the darkness
I have given this instant
Into the mire of doubt
Goes this miscreant

Unresolved in my fervor
I stand unrelenting
To achieve what's percieved
I shall be unrelenting

For here I can claim
What in truth is not there
And with impunity
Tread naked , thoughts bared

For this is my element
Where I can behold
What was hidden away
That these words have now told

I do admit
An obsession percieved
With writing excised
Is to be believed

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 1999-12-12 09:16 PM

Dr.Moose1,
I totally agree.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-12-12 09:47 PM

Oh how true

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-12-12 10:39 PM

I truly enjoy seeing another facet of "Da Moose"...

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 1999-12-13 02:47 AM

Interesting words - I do like.

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