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Open Poetry #4

walk into my love

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-12-10 05:09 PM

Clear my mind of all of this,
Let me fall into your gaze.
Show me life with just one kiss,
Burn away this lonely haze.

Show yourself for who you are,
From the shadows rise above.
For I have traveled very far,
But you must walk into my love.

The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.

Dolphins3
Member

since 1999-09-30

Posts 135
Wisconsin

1 posted 1999-12-10 05:36 PM

Kevin, Beautiful poem.

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

2 posted 1999-12-10 06:50 PM

lovely! the last few step sometimes matter the most, don't they?

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

3 posted 1999-12-10 07:00 PM

Nicely said, Kevin..."Let me fall into your gaze." and "But you must walk into my love." are fresh, beautiful; images. Good work

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-12-10 08:34 PM

Beautiful, Kevin!

Denise

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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5 posted 1999-12-10 08:42 PM

Beautiful! Bravo, Kev! Simply and elegantly stated

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

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