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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-12-10 05:09 PM


Clear my mind of all of this,
Let me fall into your gaze.
Show me life with just one kiss,
Burn away this lonely haze.

Show yourself for who you are,
From the shadows rise above.
For I have traveled very far,
But you must walk into my love.


 The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Dolphins3
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1 posted 1999-12-10 05:36 PM


Kevin, Beautiful poem.  
Saxoness
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2 posted 1999-12-10 06:50 PM


lovely! the last few step sometimes matter the most, don't they?

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Beki
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3 posted 1999-12-10 07:00 PM


Nicely said, Kevin..."Let me fall into your gaze." and "But you must walk into my love." are fresh, beautiful; images. Good work  
Denise
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4 posted 1999-12-10 08:34 PM


Beautiful, Kevin!

 Denise



caroline
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5 posted 1999-12-10 08:42 PM


Beautiful!  Bravo, Kev! Simply and elegantly stated  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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