Open Poetry #4 |
walk into my love |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Clear my mind of all of this, Let me fall into your gaze. Show me life with just one kiss, Burn away this lonely haze. Show yourself for who you are, From the shadows rise above. For I have traveled very far, But you must walk into my love. The two most waisted things in life are time and potential, I have both and not a clue what to do with them. |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Kevin, Beautiful poem. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
lovely! the last few step sometimes matter the most, don't they? "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Nicely said, Kevin..."Let me fall into your gaze." and "But you must walk into my love." are fresh, beautiful; images. Good work |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Kevin! Denise |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Beautiful! Bravo, Kev! Simply and elegantly stated It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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