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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 1999-12-09 06:01 PM


Pardon me compadres
By omission I have sinned
Though not alone by any means
I'm still quite chagrined

My replys have been too few
And by way of an excuse
As E. Fudd said one time to me
"Stoopid ugwy big dumb moose"

So I'm writing this to say
That the Doc that you all know
Has a new assistant
The famous M.Marceau

Who's agreed to help me comment
On all of your fine works
So I can reply more often
And not feel like such a jerk !

© Copyright 1999 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-12-09 06:51 PM


LOL...nice one.
Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
2 posted 1999-12-09 07:46 PM


Yo! Dr. Moose
A jerk you're not!
It is that Fudd
who should be shot!

I here by declare
Elmer Fudd season open!
So go bag one now
I'll preheat the oven!

I just love the skin... umm, umm, umm... yummy in the tummy. Happy Hunting!  

Bugs Bunny
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 28
Elmer Fudd's Carrot Patch
3 posted 1999-12-09 11:31 PM


Huntin' season? Elmer Fudd's da game? Count dis wascally wabbit in on dat!!  

 yeeeennnt...what's up, Doc?

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 1999-12-10 12:20 PM


Dr.Moose -

I think I like
it oh, so fine ...
your replies done
by Mr. Mime.

Way to go!
I think I see
what a funny
Moose you be.


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-12-10 05:43 PM


Responding, Moose, in pantomime?
Your humor, Doctor, is sublime
Just think of all the mega-bytes
You're saving here on Passion's sites!

Apologize - no need for such
We love you, Moosie, very much
You crack us up with your fine wit
The verse you write is quite a hit!

:

 Denise



Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 1999-12-10 05:46 PM


M.Marceau? A stranger in our midst?.... I'll keep my eye open for 'im......

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
7 posted 1999-12-10 07:24 PM


Far be it from me to speak for the Moose, much more the mime... but you ladies are funnnnney!  
Bugs Bunny
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 28
Elmer Fudd's Carrot Patch
8 posted 1999-12-10 08:23 PM


Andwew....who you callin' a wady...huh?  

 yeeeennnt...what's up, Doc?

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
9 posted 1999-12-10 08:36 PM


Thanks all for your comments
M. Marceau would say the same
But somehow he is being quiet
With his face against the pane

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