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Keep singing, Poets. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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What cause is there to rest chin on hand if life is only a merry-go-dream? Would poets lose fuel for words if sorrow wilted to leave a stalk alone of joy? For life lines the brow and lines the page and torment becomes a call to hope Every gladdened song therefore is brighter still when a tune of loss is sung before Poets strong keep singing words of life guardians in our gardens of death and light 10.12.99 ...the shells upon the warm sands have taken from their own lands the echo of their story...Enya |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Dear Severn, I beg to differ with you on a comment regarding one of my poems, although it was beautifully expressed, But you are the one who has been an inspiration to all of us, at such a young age, to have written such a variety of works, (which incidently, I would like an autographed copy of your first book of poetry). with such maturity and insight well beyond your years. And here is another example. It's great! Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, Your groping gives more light Than all my hoping. Beautiful poem. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh Liz.  I don't know what to say. Except: Thankyou. Everyone can claim to have inspired in their own way, I think - and you HAVE inspired me my friend. [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-09-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You, Sy, are a master, groping singer!  Thankyou. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So beautiful, Severn! Denise |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Severn such a beautiful poem. B Gravitt |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Severn, you continue to amaze me with your versatility. Well done.....again! To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Severn I loved this piece. I especially liked the phrase "if life is only a "merry-go-dream" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Severn, you are so remarkable and so keenly aware of life and give it such grace and rhythm with words that take my breath. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful Severn |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Obscure in verse and inspirational as well, a mighty line followed from the first to the last! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amazing piece, Severn. Very powerful words. Michael |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Denise - thankyou. Betty - ditto. I.F.F  That is a lovely thing to say.Eloise - thankyou! I think innovation helps. Martie - well the feeling is mutual so we should go out and get those oxygen masks together OK?! Ruth - hugs. How you doing? Chris - glad to have inspired. Michael - Bless you hope you are feeling better. |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
A truly lovely poem, shows a great depth of insight and mirrors perfectly the aspirations of the true poet's heart. Well done! Rod |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Thankyou, my new poet friend! K |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Severn, This is absolutley Beautiful !! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Severn - Again ... such truth in your words. I love merry-go-rounds ... they spin the most fantastic people into our playgrounds. So glad you came to play. I hear you singing ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
D A - thanks! You are one of those poets you know! Marge - and how glad I am that into this playground I came. You have a beautiful singing voice my friend. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I Loooooooove the "Merry-go-dream".... I want one.......... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Magic~~~Simply, beautifully~~Magic! It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nan - it's the kind of thing I think Santa's elves would be happy to make for you... Caroline - magic indeed - coming to this place!! Thanks. K |
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