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lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
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New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 1999-12-10 10:28 AM


I cling to every word
That passes from your lips
Kiss me and breath your love
Deep inside of me
Your hair, spun as silk
By one angel for another
I feel it on my bare skin
As we lay together
Touch me with your body
Touch me with your mind
Again and again

© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 1999-12-10 01:17 PM


OOH:0 Touch me with your mind....liked it very much!

Kiss me and breath your love inside me....I'm melting....I'm melting..

BEAUTIFUL! Keep daydreaming....just don't get caught! hehe!

Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
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2 posted 1999-12-10 01:21 PM


WOW!

Lost boy don't ever loose that. This is beautiful.


 B Gravitt



Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin
3 posted 1999-12-10 02:32 PM


Great poem Lostboy. I love it when you day dream.
paperguardian
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since 1999-12-07
Posts 25

4 posted 1999-12-10 02:47 PM


  I need some of those daydreams! LOL  Great poem again - I especially liked the hair spun by angels.  You should change your name to Romeo!!
danni
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since 1999-11-20
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wisconsin
5 posted 1999-12-10 03:03 PM


Whew! Lostboy, wish I had those kind of dreams. Might make my days a little brighter.
Keep on dreaming! And may you one day wake up to the real thing if you haven't already.  

lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
6 posted 1999-12-10 03:35 PM


Here's a daydream, wish we were all sitting around a huge fieldstone fireplace in a mountain cabin so I could thank you in person.
Oh man, I just read what I wrote, I mean verbally, hehe!!!
Goodnight all, sweet dreams!!!

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