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Candles Flicker
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Candles Flicker |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Candles Flicker Mind churning in speculation doubts forming into life candles flicker the eye of truth woven intricately through the flame. Trace the hidden, lurking shadows in a paint by number scheme slowly energize the morning by connecting to the light. |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
I love how you've pared the idea down its very bones. Candles, light, morning, all are significant things aren't they. I do wonder if there's anything specific about 'the light' ? or is this a general good term? Very interested to know.  |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
don't want to let this slip away.. [This message has been edited by Seaangel (edited 12-06-1999).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Seaangel:Thanks for reading and yes there all related. The light at the end was cause it brought in a positive reflection so I guess it would be considered general. Thanks again I appreciate much. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Hey LD: Liked the depth within the simplicity of this one. Well done! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is so beautifully written Lost Dreamer... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...need I say another word? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This is very pretty, LostDreamer. Methinks I like it. I do. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful light, Gloria! Very lovely! Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
My Thanks to all of you, I appreciate your kindness. |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
I liked the light Lost Dreamer. B Gravitt |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Free verse definitely becomes you, LD.... Hey - Nice pic... Ya think???.. |
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