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Talking to myself...
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Talking to myself... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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I wish we could put our memories inside a drawer - distanced from our heart because then I'd never remember the pain of us being apart I could walk past the drawer and never open it slip beneath the covers and imagine Pretend that you're still here to give me comfort to dream that you still want to love me To talk over my fears knowing you'd love me anyway to use your shoulder as a haven for my tears Instead I joke and laugh wishing you could see inside the me that's frightened sleep lady sleep Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hugs. Sad and nicely written. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is really beautiful, Rainbow. To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I can relate to this...love lost. Sad yet beautiful. Well done. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Rainbow. So sadly touching. (love your pic...cute!) Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl - My thoughts are with you, my friend. This piece is too sad a refrain for your loving heart to sing. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Could feel the loneliness and sadness. Well written. Wish we could put them in a drawer sometimes. But I wonder how many times we would wander by that drawer and try to refrain from opening it? Love your graphic, it's adorable! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
HUGS  |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
RainbowGirl such sad, but beautiful words. I echo what WhtDove said, and I really wish we could place them in a drawer. ((((Hugs))))) B Gravitt |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Some memories are best when shoved to the back of that drawer, RG. But keep some towards the front as we are shaped by our past. (Is that YOU in that glass?)  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes...so sad and so beautiful RG.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
yep, very sad but very beautiful sleep lady sleep, take care of you big hugs |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thank you all...they may have seemed sad thoughts but in many ways I count myself lucky...maybe some, or even all, will know what I mean by that...  HUGS and thank you, you really are such generous people and such big hearts! Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
beautiful  ) and yes i do know what you mean.very well said. |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Awesome poem Rainbow. I really felt this one. HUGS |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Nicely written, Rainbow I liked this Liz |
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