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Breakfast |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas 
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The caramel sun broke like an egg Over the skillet's horizon Spilling golden-white upon the Sleeping grains God in the kitchen Humming a tuneless ditty Stooping to scratch a kitten Behind its tawny ears I only have one request Lord Make mine over-hard Alicat the persnikitty |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great one Alicat! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Such a peaceful feeling this gives me, sug.  The emotions this brings forward takes me back to my childhood...thank you for the trip. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent imagery, nicely written |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds great! ------------------ Denise |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
It took me a few moments to understand the ending. Then I felt silly because I didn't get it right off. You know, you're poems always make me think! Nice work, Ali!!! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Cute!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Made me smile. : ) Thanks. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
oh I love this, will think of you and your poem my next sunrise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very well done, Persnickitty... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
nummertje 8  I'm having fun ! |
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