Mar como amor (love like sea)

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Open Poetry #4

Mar como amor (love like sea)

Ixtab
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

0 posted 1999-12-08 01:50 AM

Tempestad,
tormenta inmedible
yo no se

Calma
navegables aguas
yo no se

Yo no se
habrá cien que si
Amor como mar
yo no he vivido
Amor como fuego
yo no he vivido
Amor como amor
es mejor

Medio descubrimiento
Albergador de vida
yo no se

*translation*

Tempest
uncontainable storms
i don't know

Calm
breachable waters
i don´t know

I don´t know
mayabe a hundred others do
but love like sea
i haven't lived
love like fire
i haven´t lived
love like love is best

Means of discovery
Holder of life
i don't know.

myslinky
Junior Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 27

1 posted 1999-12-08 02:02 AM

Can you please explain what this poem is about. I don´t understand what "you don´t know".

This is the first poem I have seen posted in spanish. I speak spanish too!

It seems very interesting.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-12-08 05:10 AM

Sometimes there is joy in the not knowing of things - because you still have the anticipation. Lovely work Ixtab.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-12-08 10:13 AM

Beautiful!

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 1999-12-08 10:32 AM

Yo sei
Que yo no sei
Las aguas fundas
Del amor
Mi corazon
En las ondas siente
felicidad
Y siente dor
Respira mejor
La alma
Em mar
de agua calma

Rusty Spanish, just having fun
I like your poem
Liz

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