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If i was gone tomorrow
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If i was gone tomorrow |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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If I was gone tomorrow Would you really know? Would you feel the slightest sorrow Would it really show? how soon would it take to fade your thoughts, my memory When my final hand is played how long will you remember me a day, a week, a month, a year It matters not you know For maybe you would shed a tear still after time, those too, must go. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful, Kevin! The clock icon goes well with it too!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You ain't going nowhere, boy. Cause we love you, yes we do. And if you left, I said if you left ... I'D CRY A RIVER OVER YOU ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
*takes the martini away from marge* your startin to repeat yourself hehe [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 12-07-1999).] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Nice piece Kevin. Thought provoking. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh wow, I really liked this...really got me thinking...As obviously you were!! What a powerful lot you had to say in just 3 stanzas! Bravo! I admire one who can say so much in so few words.... - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
All things pass and it is horrid to think we might be forgotten. Great writing! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kevin, there would be rivers of tears my friend |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Read this twice and it got me thinking.... Great piece Kevin... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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paperguardian Junior Member
since 1999-12-07
Posts 25 |
Wow! In a few words you have managed to express the greatest fear we have - of being forgotten. Touched me very personally. |
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