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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Live in my words Let my words live in you. . . Give me your mind and let me show it All the things it never knew. Come with me on a voyage To places far and near. . . Give me your soul and let me share with it All the things that I hold dear. Fly with me, fly and be free Here's the way to start. . . Give me your mind and give me your soul And let me give you. . . . . . my heart That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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jbouder Member Elite
since 1999-09-18
Posts 2534Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash |
Very nice work, Sven. Especially the first stanza. Very nice. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To have someone take an offered heart... let me know what that feels like, okay? *S* Well done! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow, Sven - this is every poet's dream I think. Well worded.  K |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . suthern, I'll let you know. . . hopefully my offer will be accepted. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very beautiful words |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven my friend, another poem that's so beautiful. Beauty from a beautiful soul I believe The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful words! Denise |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Beautiful. It would be hard to refuse a heart filled with words like this. B Gravitt |
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