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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
I have a little heartache That goes wherever I go. It's hidden deep within I want no one to know. I have a little teardrop I blink it back inside. I hold my head up high And swallow it with pride. I have a secret fantasy Etched in the shadows of my mind. I walk back through that path alone To the dreams so hard to find. I have a compelling wish To bring closure to this door. To collect my many tears And think of you no more. [This message has been edited by Eloise (edited 12-03-1999).] |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
And in time it will happen. Hang on. nicely done; |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oooohhh...  hard to do sometimes... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise - This is so well stated. May your heart find what you seek. Lovely, my dear. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This says a great deal. I hope you can close those doors too and go on |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching poem, Eloise, and well done!  Denise |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Eloise, seems you and I need to close a few doors. Hang in there girl, we will survive and in time we will again.I know how you feel. B Gravitt |
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