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The Diluvian First Mother, Part II |
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H. Arlequin Member
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The Diluvian First Mother PART I I The Tale II The Turmoil III The Turning Point IV The Training V The Ten Decades VI The Taking on Stores VII The Tenants VIII The Terror PART II IX The Tempests X The Touching XI The Trial Birds XII The Thanksgiving XIII The Taming of the Land XIV The Turning Out XV The Thirty Decades XVI The Twilight Years XVII The Time to Rest PART II IX The Tempests Above the wind the pelting rain, for forty days and nights it fell its furious rage unceasing, the pregnant earth, in birthing pain her amniotic inner shell effused, the flood increasing. The constant noise on rooftop shakes, cyclonic winds' advancing roar, add to our consternation, forbidden fire, no oven bakes cold fare, incessantly the pour drowns out all conversation. The days turn into nights, the black of doubt's domain without some light to comfort from despairing... the lurch, that sickening attack of fear's cold clutch...we float despite a dread beyond comparing. His perfection, five hundred feet in length, became a modest toy to tempests round it raging, and motion sickness, indiscreet, eight souls at once thought to destroy with merciless rampaging. X The Touching The suddenness of silence shocked the ear, as sunlight blessed the eye for forty days forgotten, the balmy sea and ark concoct a soothing rhythm to decry her tempests, misbegotten. No tiller set the course to move nor wind propelled the ark. Adrift, unknown what destination, no anxious thought asked faith to prove before the fact, salvation's gift, I Am's propitiation. A warmer wind made rougher seas and dried the throat of man and beast despite poor ventilation, one sideways slide made progress cease the settling list each hour decreased, we'd found our destination. Confined within those frightful days to pressing chores with no escape made thoughts of land the sweeter, to see the green, smell bright displays far mountains climb, to seed landscape or carve sweet smelling cedar. XI The Trial Birds Expectant days of quick release, adventures in new paradise, turned into months of waiting while prison toil denied the ease one day of rest provides for eyes too long in contemplating. For forty days we sat and rocked. The keel's imbedding motion stopped, but not the hated linger, those lapping water sounds that mocked our hope, dried up, their levels dropped, the raven took a finger and Noah sent it out to see if paradise the glad report, or were its guests impatient. For days it flew glad to be free, His word, though heard, ignored, "Comport yourselves in life, consentient!" The faithful dove when sent as well returned at night to roost within without a sign, that waiting Eden had prepared to swell with new creation freed from sin, His presence contemplating. XII The Thanksgiving The olive tree does not grow high on mountain slopes, but farther down abounding warmth its preference, that day the dove on even's sky returned its twig, a thankful sound was raised in worshipped deference, of One whose worth all life must praise. Exultant joy sought a rebirth in hearts attuned to shout it, the fearsome journey's endless days complete, repopulating earth, the haste to be about it, His safety through the planned event, the pleasure of His guiding hand, sufficient the assurance that what He wills naught can prevent, for those who choose by faith to stand, He is the flood insurance. The beasts awake, and add the din of hungry weakened feeding needs in joyous expectation, they're given too, new worlds to win to multiply their species seeds without an exhortation. XIII The Taming of the Land Three hundred twenty days inside since He had sealed the only door, the roof became a portal upon a blighted world. Denied a finished Eden to explore, not born again, immortal, man must wrench his promised land of smothered trees, from death's wet grave and start anew his garden. Unlike the first with His command, we knew autonomy would pave the way, our hearts to harden . We first prepared to burn debris from orchard plots and arbor sites, then walled in their protection, built birthing pens, and nesting tree cut feeding spots near salted heights for livestock use selection. XIV The Turning Out The birds were first to be released when grain was broadcast on the fields a harvest soon expected, the reptiles next were herded east to feed on fish, crustacean yields profusion had directed. Small game and ruminants called clean, domestication candidates from carnivores protected, would need the man, time in between the ark and their gestation dates, were for new pens selected. The last to leave had been sustained by four grains mashed in olive oil, the year since they were boarded. A sixty day head start maintained, non-predators first touched the soil to gain reserves they hoarded. The cat, the bear and wolverine were made to fear the sight of man, when from the ark extracted, they fled on sight were seldom seen. Compelled at times, as hunger can, they from the weak subtracted. XV The Thirty Decades As if his contract at an end the man of faith chose less to speak than tame the land. Two vineyards, his effort multiplied. He'd tend the vines alone, the job to seek their best, and prune the discards. Those days all life was multiplied from seed in soil, to sturgeon roe and wives were no exception, perhaps the ark had stultified desire, unless the sun would show, the womb refused conception. The family grew and went their way to follow greener pastureland for flocks had tripled yearly, but husband Noah chose to stay his ark and vinyards reprimand a past that cost us dearly. On lower slopes of Ararat Salvation's shadow higher up, we spend our days together, this fecund womb each year begat its crop, unstopped, a desire cup imbibed despite the weather. XVI The Twilight Years Nine hundred years to walk the earth to relish sights, or taste and touch the nature of man's being, seem more that fair, to find its worth and He who gives life overmuch, despite our failure seeing. It troubled him. On certain days up toward the ark I'd see him climb, as brothers he remembered the flood destroyed, to offer praise unto I Am, and pray they'd find the peace that He had tendered man on earth, that, somehow, where the spirits rest of those now dead, earth choices find reversal, to join the living in their prayer for immortality, instead invoking joy's rehearsal. Though man and ark remain unchanged,,, was Noah had six hundred years that day of flood confusion... it is the promise prearranged of paradise without earth's tears that woos to his conclusion. XVII The Time to Rest Before the flood I walked with him, I stood with pride at his right hand despite the heaped derision, together, ribs and sheathing trim, as one, we heard His last command, that closing door's collision. Those dread dark nights the tempest railed, the endless labor to maintain a practical salvation, I was the one, when courage failed, whose touch consoled, helped to regain, for him, his inspiration. The womb that bore his ready seed was mine, their numbers through the years are more than I remember, And it is I, whose widow's weed consoles, that put to rest in tears God's man in his December. This story's end will now be told by children of his answered call ascending as expected, had faith not heard His plot unfold, assured agnosticism's gall, the many would reject it. --H. Arlequin . . . . The Women of the Word Poems From the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm |
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Mike Member Elite
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Splendid effort. Truly enjoyed. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Mr. Arlequin - I am speechless. What an amazing piece. Impressive. Denise |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
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thanks Mike, and smoooooooooooooooooches Denise... ![]() HA |
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snow in summer Member
since 1999-08-28
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Enjoyed Part II as much as part I. The ending is particularly wonderful. |
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Nan
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Thumbs up.... Toes too....... ![]() Awesome work, HA!! |
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