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I woke today with a scowl
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I woke today with a scowl |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I woke today with a scowl, the smell of coffee brewing did not bring the usual smile. I stumbled into the dog and didn't apologize, I showered and dressed, careful not to make eye contact, lest the sadness I would see should make me cry. I wondered the source of this discontent, and thought the day must be cloudy, a storm brewing outside, but when I finally remembered to check and the sky was bluer than blue, I knew this scowl was only cause of how much I miss you. ©1999 Iloveit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Glad to know I'm not the only grump... and coffee flavored with tears is the pits! LOL. That missing stuff is devastating, isn't it? Nice one, Lovey! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
hah hah hah ROFG....she teases me about being a granny and here she is a "senior" member ROFG..... *blink blink* wait a minute, I am too....what am I laughing at? lolol thanks O&o yep ld missing is the worst  |
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Athas Junior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 24Edinburgh, Scotland |
Oh I like it. I think I can assoatiate with your feeling. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: well, I'm scowling as well cause I'm going out of my head at the slowness of life...and I'm raring to go...oh well... HUSG my friend...tea? Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Um...er... uh Lovey??? What, pray tell, is Id missing??? Is your ego gone, too? LOL. And Rainbow's streaking... get out the camera with the zoom lens, guys! *G* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: yep, at this rate I shall be totally grey within the hour...ROFL...and definitely a No No to the camera's...mind you, it would mean only a few of us left on here, that would speed things up for sure.. HUSG Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
All this time I thought you were the most perfect person in the world but.....you stumbled into the dog and didn't apologize? Jeez! I may have to revise my thinking...ok I did....you're still perfect. I know what you mean about the missing part. It just seems to give an overall feeling of frustration and discontent without pointing at any one thing specifically. You described it very well. (but, next time, please apologize to the dog, ok?) |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Enjoyed this piece Iloveit....had some of the same mornings myself.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
Athas thanks and welcome ROFG@Rainbow streaking…..whew did ANYONE catch that rainbow on film? lolol suthern lol L(ong) D(istance)...ld…..ld…..you know ld relationships…….ld missing……aren't they one in the same if you know what I mean and RG…no way …it would INCREASE traffic and Ron would be screaming UNCLE lol Balladeer lol@still perfect……and yep an email from a friend gave me the idea for the poem, and I didn't really stumble into the dog, so am I forgiven? or do I need a spanking Pepper thanks, and yep, I think all of us here understand that missing you feeling…..sigh |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well, I was gonna give you comfort, but everyone's got you laughing. And it wasn't real anyway. But I sure have had mornings like that (real ones). hehe good one! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You people are Justin Sayne....  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
 Very sad. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Hey!! This was MY morning! LOL...except I haven't got a dog to stumble over (Don't worry Bal~I'd apologize to it if I did!  )I can relate! Well done! It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks all *big smiles this morning* ...and Bal? yep, went home and hugged the dog *g* |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Is that what we, men, call the morning scowl ? ... Hmmmm, no, that must be a different word ...  Nice one Lovey ... and good to see you smiling ...  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Missing someone can be the pits |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
JTF and hoot love your graphics, lol, but when you are severly limited on time, cute little pics are the first to go and thanks JTF, talking to that someone you have been missing helps out lots in the smiling dept. ...hugsand hoot, yep, don't I know....hugs |
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