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Open Poetry #4

Creatures Of The Night

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 1999-12-04 11:08 PM

Tossing and turning from side to side.
Trying to elude this nightmare inside.
The midnight fantasy has come to a halt
While univited guests are trying to assault.

The scenario playing inside of my head
Are of spiders and bugs creeping around on this bed.
They creep and they crawl and they bump in the night.
The terror I'm feeling is quite a fright.

All shapes, size and colors looking so mean.
They are the ugliest I've ever seen.
Flies, ants, black widows and lightning bugs too.
And here I am, without even a shoe.

Swatting and smacking these creatures away.
These covers are now in complete disarray.
Tumbling and rolling I fall to the floor.
Thrilled to awaken to a dream, nothing more.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

1 posted 1999-12-04 11:12 PM

Nicely done. Think I would want to wake up as well!!

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-12-04 11:12 PM

Being something of an insect collector, I feel the creepy-crawlies are a bit maligned.

'Tis an excellent verse.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 1999-12-04 11:21 PM

Eloise, Balladeer Pest Control is at you service!

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

4 posted 1999-12-04 11:32 PM

Ohme - You got that right! Thanks.
DreamEvil - Thank you much.
Balladeer - Ah, a bug man! Where were you when I needed you? I'll file you in my rolodex for future reference!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 1999-12-05 12:03 PM

Eloise -
Well, I hope the image of this one
doesn't stay with me into the night.
LOL ... I think I'll just stay awake.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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