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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-12-04 01:42 PM


Are we blinded by the competitivness
Shining into our eyes?
In the form, "If we win...
"We'll play again..."
Until the end of time?
Are we blinded though, by something that's so fake
That it would take a monster
From inside ourselves,
To shake?
Maybe we should take a look
At the things worth more than a second glance
And then, the game shall be over...
And we'll all be doing
Our little victory dance!

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JOY


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lostboy
Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 1999-12-04 02:38 PM


Kind of like..stop and smell the roses. Well done Joy, I get the picture!
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
2 posted 1999-12-04 04:46 PM


Winning is NOT everything
It's how you play the game

How right you are JOY.

DB

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-12-05 12:16 PM


Yep, I think a lot are blinded by that competitiveness! Well said.
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