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Open Poetry #4

Uniform Dolor

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-12-04 04:57 AM

My tired soul cries for an answer
to the question I do not yet know.
I will not be a nebbish dancer
to the music of my petulant foe.
I have been waiting for the snowfall
to secure me in such wholesome warm.
I've been caught up in this free for all
and unmindful to its shape and form.
I always knew where I was going.
I discerned my path in the vanguard.
With one swift, harsh blow, I am knowing
I'll never forget that I am scarred.
I live each day of dramatic flair
behind this infected personna,
melting under each succeeding stare
with the grace of a primadonna.
There is nothing left to hold on to
besides the memories that linger.
I am hurt and abandoned by you-
uniform to my doffed ring finger.

©1999 Erin Solari
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Erin has asked again that I post a piece for her. Thank you.
DE

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~onevoice~

"Odi et amo. Quare id faciam, fortasse requiris. Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior."

[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 12-04-1999).]

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-12-04 05:03 AM

Please delete

[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 12-04-1999).]

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-12-04 05:05 AM

Three little words hold a universe of meaning when applied to you Pixie; I love you.

Excellent work, love.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-12-04 10:58 PM

Erin, this is beautiful. I hope the healing is going well and that you will soon return to passions.

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