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armanca
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since 1999-07-07
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Tennessee

0 posted 1999-12-02 02:08 PM


Tears are not products of pain
they are merely instigators
Because tears are like windshield wiper fluid
Making the pain clearer.


Carman

© Copyright 1999 Carman - All Rights Reserved
jennyanydots
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since 1999-07-09
Posts 15

1 posted 1999-12-02 05:36 PM


I never thought of it like that...insightful. I like this title too.
armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
2 posted 1999-12-02 10:26 PM


I really appreciate your replies... I enjoy the comments. Thank you very much!!!!


Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-12-03 07:01 AM


Funny that - just what I think...
Like this - short yet sees it all.

armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
4 posted 1999-12-03 04:18 PM


Thank you severn for you reply!

It is appreciated


Carman

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