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The Sunset Hour |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Dramatic sunsets framed within the sky a ball of orange that almost blinds the eye darkened trees are shadows as nature falls asleep farmer's last check on cows that cuddle with the sheep Yesterday the hills were coloured violet laid before me like a cozy winter's banquette clouds swirl in fantastic formations like dancers in a show golden bubbles lit up from the dazzling horizon below As the sun's arc grows smaller it seems the world shrinks in size watching from my window I could never fully capture this prize the spirit of quietness now rests upon the dusk of nature at curfew I wish I could paint this picture so that I could share with you ------------------ Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-02-1999).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rainbow, You paint a beautiful sunset! This must be the day for sunsets! Liz |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
very vey beautiful  |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
You did share. And it is a lovely picture. Thanks. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, Rainbow, you did paint a glorious, colorful sunset! Thank you! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RainbowGirl, You have a ful palette and paint a beautiful picture. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
RG...Picasso has nothing over you, your art work is supurb |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I'm off to walk the trail as I hear the dawn chorus sing as dawn gives light upon my trail so I shall think of you as herons wake and owls cry and blackbirds sing to me I'll take the whole view in as squirrels jump tree to tree.. Good morning all.. or goodnight.. ------------------ Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You make everything sound so picturesque, dear rainbow. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bal: That's because seen from my eyes, it is and I love these early mornings where I watch the shadows play almost like dreams, you never can catch them... Night.. HUSG ------------------ Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Beautiful ! ... ... both of them ... Rainbow, you're definitely a brilliant poet ..  ... you created a vivid sunset imageHUSG Pssssst Lovey, what does vey mean ?? [This message has been edited by JTF (edited 12-03-1999).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Rg - beautiful, beautiful. And I have to further: you did paint the picture. Words are often better than a picture, for a painting is so final. That's the beauty of our art - we leave the doors open for the reader to add to the initial painting. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I don't know which I like better - a sunrise or a sunset... Sometimes I have trouble making decisions like that - You're making a pretty good argument for sunsets here - Nice job, RG... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Really vivid, RainbowGirl. Hope the sunrise greets you with great surprise. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
that was beautiful:-) i can see it now.you really can make words come alive:-)i think all your poems are so very beautiful:-) what a talent.you have some very special friends rainbow. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Queen I'm sort of heading your way tomorrow - Nuremburg via Frankfurt - alas, too far from you to give you back your Hugs - I'll ask the pilot to dip a wing in your honor, Your Ladyship. I loved the poem |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Queen I'm sort of heading your way tomorrow - Nuremburg via Frankfurt - alas, too far from you to give you back your Hugs - I'll ask the pilot to dip a wing in your honor, Your Ladyship. I loved the poem |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks all, it's really such an incredible vision..I'm mermerised constantly... "if a picture could paint a thousand words", then I would love to write a zillion.. LJA: Shame, and such a short distance to row as well for your favourite tart...oooops HUGS all ------------------ Yesterday is but today's memory and tomorrow is today's dream... |
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