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Open Poetry #4

As Lonely As I'm

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 1999-11-09 11:17 AM

I don't 've a mother,
I don't 've a family,
I don't 've a place to live,
I've a friend who cares,
Sometime It 's hard to feel
How one can live like this,
I'm walking alone,
Noone with me,
To shake hands,
Or to hold me tight,
I don't have mother to love me

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-09-1999).]

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 1999-11-09 01:04 PM

Disturbing image. Well written.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

2 posted 1999-11-09 01:09 PM

agree with RS, sad but beautifully written

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 1999-11-09 06:09 PM

So sad..

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-10 03:34 AM

Enjoyed the read.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

5 posted 1999-11-20 01:36 PM

V

You have many friends here who care. Keep walking with us and we will all hold hands.

Very nice piece

-RS

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