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vandana
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0 posted 1999-11-10 06:54 PM


We're together now,
Noone is around,
All alone,
One summer night,
We ran away for awhile,
Laughing we hurried,
To hide somewhere,
I was yours,
And you're mine,
We lay on the grass,
Thinking about the memories,
We had shared,
Under the stars,
Wrapped in your fingers,
You won't let me go,
Till the time come for us to go,
I lost my heart to you,
Feeling the breeze in the sky,
Softly you wispher,
I laugh as you lift me up,
Beautiful memories,
And bitter memories,
I was gently realizing,
How much you're meant to me
The time went slowly,
We said goodbye,
Left our secert place behind,
I lay in bed all night,
I was yours,
you're mine
You were my own,

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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

1 posted 1999-11-10 11:20 PM


Very nice... enjoyed your poem.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-11 09:41 AM


Welcome to Passions

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

3 posted 1999-11-20 01:43 PM


A beautiful feeling. You expressed yourself here very well.

Enjoyed reading it very much

-RS

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