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Shhhh ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Shhhh ! ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 You stopped me mid-sentence with a softly whispered, "Shhhh." Then you rocked me to the bone. You said that you had to tell me before I figured it out on my own. You wanted to say you loved me and had for such a long time. It was time for me to listen to what your heart was saying to mine. I looked at you in astonishment, so sure that you must have known, the thoughts you were now voicing ... had been my very own. We had been so busy being friends, we didn't stop to see ... we had fallen in love ... me with you you with me. And here it is, looking us both in the eye, a love so purely simple, it causes us to sigh. When friendship goes full-circle and to this point it comes ... we can only thank our lucky stars our love has now begun. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Saving the best for last, sounds wonderful, and wonderfully put as always Elizabeth |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You rocked me to the bone with this Marge. Beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth - You are so wonderful. Martie - Your comments mean so much to me. I'm so glad you read it and liked it. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! I love it! I think this is the kind of love that lasts forever! ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
True friendship knows its own intrinsic bound The pinnacle a covenant unfound.... A friendship that's true will find that pinnacle - nice job, Marge...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - Forever is a very long time ... and aren't we glad it is so. Thank you for liking it, my friend. Nan - Never at a loss for words ... you are really nice to have around. Thank you for liking this. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Just a hunch but I think there's a romantic hiding in you somewhere, Marge. Another excellent work. |
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