Open Poetry #4 |
When Souls Get Lost |
broker6 Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 132Bellevue, NE, Sarpy |
When Souls Get Lost by © Richard J. Budig 1997 I've been looking for the peace You bring to me in the night For the touch of your hand For the quiet you bring to my heart I've been waiting for your voice To call me out of this dark place I need you to hold me In that hour just before dawn That time when souls get lost And cannot find their way home |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
That exquisite moment. You say it well Elizabeth |
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Jewl_24_1999 Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64USA |
Just beautiful... |
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Dusk Treader
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Touching little piece, greatly enjoyed, thanks ------------------ "Human pride sings a vengeful song, inspired by the times you've been walked on" - Creed - "What If" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Broker6, Just beautiful!! ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Lovely. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very good Richard |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh wow, my soul likes this one very much! Very nice thought shared in so few words! Exquisite!! ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Your work is sooooo lovely! ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Rachel_A Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70North Webster, IN USA |
wow...that tugs at me...and that's what poetry should do.... |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I felt this one |
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