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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
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the way my soul sings through the guitar strings is insane to those who don't understand ambition to be not only a rapper, but a musician a lyrical magician who relys on the definition of a person who has not only skills, but intuition about certain events and problems going on inside my mind is blind, and I can't decide wether or not I'm going to go all the way with this I didn't even know such a level of pain exists my soul is an abyss towards sympathetic voices and I am unable to make empathetic choices. How bout' this? [This message has been edited by xTr3m3sT (06-14-2008 10:23 AM).] |
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Balladeer
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Good try, Angel. This conso-whatever is one tough nut to crack. It's too easy to confuse it with internal rhyme, alliteration and assonance. It is the usage of the same consonants within words within the lines to create a certain, er, melody. Nothing has to rhyme within the lines. These sessions at Passions bring stress and tension to my senses. The memory of this tomfoolery will remain in my mind. |
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xTr3m3sT Member
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Balladeer
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better, Angel. You're about halfway there  |
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