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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2008-06-10 03:39 PM


ExCESSive uSE of CONSoNANCE may CAUSE your WORDS to SLUR,
exaCERbating SYMPtoms CERtain theraPISTS might cure.
IniTIALly SUCH treatMENTS SHOULD comMENCE as ONE'S asSESSED
diminiSHING duraTION AS ONES "ESSES" are SUpPRESSED.

Unfortunately treatment often triggers tonal stress
that transfers from the patient to the therapist no less,
or, sometimes to the Teacher as might be in this test case,
accounting for that tortured look distorting Teachs' face.

And so it is with consonance in capsulated form,
take two and they'll internally exasperate a storm,
intensifying feelings causing them to effervesce,
insuring you're a cellmate at the institute? Hell yes!

Remember, such embellishment is best before you eat
and shouldn't be swallowed, not unless you substitute for sweets.

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (06-12-2008 09:12 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-06-12 06:21 PM


Senor Moose, I can see some of the consonance you have used but I'm afraid I'm missing some others by overlooking them (my fault, not yours). Point them out to me, please...
Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2008-06-12 08:37 PM


Mr. Balladeer sir,
I will be happy to comply ( although I know this is a trap ) Edited text to follow.
Doc
I'm sure you will take me to the cleaners on this one.

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (06-12-2008 09:15 PM).]

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3 posted 2008-06-12 11:03 PM


LOL! Take you to the cleaners? You are much better than this than I. You slipped in a few that I missed completely until you pointed them out, causing me to say DARN! ( or a similar equivalent)

That "iniially" was very clever

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2008-06-13 07:04 AM


Mr. Balladeer sir,
Sufferin' succatash ! Sylvester done tawt me good !
Doc
Oh, and if you would be so kind, please substitute
"initiate" for "exasperate", my time limit ran out.
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (06-13-2008 09:48 PM).]

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