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Daybreak triolet

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

0 posted 2005-02-03 09:23 AM

Daybreak triolet

Beyond my morning window wrapped in fog
The hint of newborn day lies sleeping still.
The early risers exercise their dog;
I note in journal deeds I daily log.
Dim street lights show a pair in sweatsuit jog.
I love this quiet time and always will.
Beyond my morning window wrapped in fog
The hint of newborn day lies sleeping still

(Sorry to be late to school. I'll try to do better)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-02-03 10:12 AM

This is a whisper in the dawn. Thank you!

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03

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Oklahoma, USA

2 posted 2005-02-03 10:18 AM

Nice!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2005-02-03 11:17 PM

and in the fog
do little cat's feet follow?

Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05

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I live within myself

4 posted 2005-02-04 01:12 PM

Oh.. This is wonderful! I always thought early morning hours would be so serene. Your beautiful way of describing it makes me want even more to be a morning person! Ah.. if wishes were fishes..
I still wouldn't be able to get up early enough to go catch em! :-) great write.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-02-04 02:02 PM

Very nicely done Ken.
As gentle and soft as a whisper.

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