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kayjay
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0 posted 2005-02-03 09:23 AM


Daybreak triolet

Beyond my morning window wrapped in fog
The hint of newborn day lies sleeping still.
The early risers exercise their dog;
I note in journal deeds I daily log.
Dim street lights show a pair in sweatsuit jog.
I love this quiet time and always will.
Beyond my morning window wrapped in fog
The hint of newborn day lies sleeping still

(Sorry to be late to school. I'll try to do better)

© Copyright 2005 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-02-03 10:12 AM



This is a whisper in the dawn.  Thank you!

Not A Poet
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2 posted 2005-02-03 10:18 AM


Nice!

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3 posted 2005-02-03 11:17 PM


and in the fog
do little cat's feet follow?

Endlessecho
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4 posted 2005-02-04 01:12 PM


Oh.. This is wonderful!  I always thought early morning hours would be so serene.  Your beautiful way of describing it makes me want even more to be a morning person!  Ah.. if wishes were fishes..
I still wouldn't be able to get up early enough to go catch em!  :-)  great write.

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5 posted 2005-02-04 02:02 PM


Very nicely done Ken.
As gentle and soft as a whisper.

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