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Sunshine
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0 posted 2005-01-19 06:12 AM


Wind

Where wind awaits the feel of you
That all of man might know this touch
As you escape into the blue
Where wind awaits the feel of you
As man gives promise, dreams come true
Global flyers and all know such,
Where wind awaits the feel of you
That all of man might know your touch

~*~ http://www.virginatlanticglobalflyer.com/NewsFeatures/NewsArchive/SecretIsOut.jsp  
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1 posted 2005-01-20 10:49 AM

Really smooth the way you disguised the repetitions. Nice theme too.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-01-20 11:36 AM

Well thank you Pete...pat yourself on the back, though, because I have the likes of you and Wings to study from.
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3 posted 2005-01-28 01:23 PM

Do you suppose the wind feels us?  We do have a way of making it stop to listen, don't we?..
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