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Endlessecho
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0 posted 2005-01-17 01:23 PM


:-P

My salad dressing is too much.
I never seem to get it right.
The vinegar a bitter touch.
My salad dressing is too much.
This is a poor, pitiful lunch.
Oh! What a simply awful sight.
My salad dressing is too much.
I never seem to get it right.  

My greens are drowning in Oil Lake.
What a disaster my haste does spew.
This is a culinary mistake!!
My greens are drowning in Oil Lake.
Carrots are rafts for lettuce’s sake.
Where the rest are I haven’t a clue.
My greens are drowning in Oil Lake.
What a disaster my haste does spew!  



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Sunshine
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Nan
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2 posted 2005-01-25 08:28 PM


I particularly like the carrots & lettuce teaming up like life-preservers... Very, very cute indeed...
Endlessecho
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3 posted 2005-01-27 10:28 AM


Thanks!  This was my actual lunch that day, and unfortunately the only thing that was seeming to "inspire" me.  ;-P  
Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2005-02-11 09:58 PM


Endless,
This is a classic!
I'm off to "oil lake" to do a little deep fryin' in the hot springs. I'll let ya know how it works out.
Doc

Endlessecho
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5 posted 2005-02-14 07:46 AM


Haha.. Thanks, Doc!  Anyway, hopefully your culinary attempt went better...
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