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Not A Poet
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0 posted 2005-01-18 05:36 PM


The Triolet

It is not hard to write a triolet
with only eight short lines and rhymes but two.
We struggle for the proper words, and yet,
it is not hard to write a triolet.
Repeating lines seem cause to get upset
and proper placement proves it quite untrue
it is not hard to write a triolet
with only eight short lines and rhymes but two.

© Copyright 2005 Pete Rawlings - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-18 06:23 PM


Uh-oh.

I've been pronouncing it wrong
all this time.

I'm such a zit.



When you can't find a subject matter,
write the theme...love it!

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2 posted 2005-01-18 06:48 PM


Heh...

Two to one, Sir...

you owe me another.
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3 posted 2005-01-18 07:04 PM


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Now you owe me one more...

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4 posted 2005-01-19 12:28 PM


Ouch. You are making it hard.

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5 posted 2005-01-19 12:42 PM


She can do that..
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6 posted 2005-01-19 12:46 PM


I like the expanded triolets where several are strung together on a central theme...

Jack, Jackie and Bob

Bring back the Jackie Gleason shows
That made me laugh with wild delight
Until I had a runny nose.
Bring back the Jackie Gleason shows.

They were just ordinary joes
But Ralph and Norton were a sight!
Bring back the Jackie Gleason shows
That made me laugh with wild delight.

Bring back the funny Bob Hope shows
Wherever men were sent to fight.
He traveled with the USO's
Bring back the funny Bob Hope shows.

While soldiers fought against our foes
He offered them a brief respite.
Bring back those funny Bob Hope Shows
Wherever men were sent to fight.

Bring back those great Jack Benny shows
That used to fill my Friday night.
Chin held by hand in classic pose
Bring back those great Jack Benny shows.

As everyone who watched him knows
His fiddle playing was a fright!
Bring back those great Jack Benny shows
That used to fill my Friday night.

The tides of Life have ebbs and flows
That bring the dark where once was light.
Joy comes to life and then it goes.
The tides of Life have ebbs and flows.

These three now share deserved repose
Forever young in Heaven's sight.
The tides of Life have ebbs and flows
That bring the dark where once was light.

In my mind admiration grows
For these three stars that shone so bright
Until the final curtain close
In my mind admiration grows.

I thank them for their silly prose
And bid the three a fond goodnight.
In my mind admiration grows
For these three stars that shone so bright.

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7 posted 2005-01-19 06:14 AM


'Deer...

were you always Teacher's Pet?




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8 posted 2005-01-28 01:20 PM


If they're so easy, Pete - How's come I haven't done one this week??  Yours is grand..

Hm.. And all this time I thought Deer was a Big Mac!

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