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Endlessecho
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I live within myself

0 posted 2004-02-13 02:35 PM


An Ode to Normalcy

“Sententious”, no one could ever dub me.
In fields of normalcy I tread.
No great words flow from these lips.
Of great philosophers I have not read.
But, I’ve enjoyed reading
the poetry of the wind.
I’ve listened as it’s spoken to me
answering my questions again and again.

Acknowledgement I have found
by looking up into the sky.
Explanations long searched for,
in smallest whispers lie.

I’ve not sat within select groups
that talk about the “deeper” things.
I merely long for the simple life
and dream of the peace that it’ll bring.
In purest moments I’ve found enlightenment.
No deep sacred secret to be found.
Not with the elite and their proud speech
but with a humble child with feet aground.

My answers lay not in the wisdom of nobles.
Their higher ways are not my own.
I do not wish to reach great heights
measured by men remembered in stone.
I enjoy the words of beauty
spoken by those moved to tell.
However, I enjoy with an appreciative ear
Not a dissection of all that we can expel.

To be common I have sought.
The normal life we’ve all forgot;
not a burden, but my chosen lot.

Do not look down on the simple things
As though we have moved on.
Progress never meant to forget these given things
that all life once was built upon.
Not something to overcome
or find a way to evolve from;
They are the final memories we’ll have
when our walk in this system is done.



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1 posted 2004-02-13 05:15 PM


"Normalcy" is too boring of an existence to even consider... HOWEVR... this write is not normal at all... in fact it is quite "ab"normal...
Great job.

But now the animal is in pain...
And now it's starting to rain...
But I'm still the same.

fayth
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since 2003-05-03
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2 posted 2004-02-13 05:31 PM


this is too too beautiful!

I have been quietly reading the poems here for some days and never really bothered with trying to find my neglected long forgotten password only I had to say how much I liked this!!

thanks

Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 2004-02-23 06:10 PM


Endlessecho,
Took the words right outta my mouth, ya did.
Don't know about form, all I know is I liked what you had to say.
Doc

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
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4 posted 2004-02-24 09:21 AM


Marvelous poem and a great reminder to us all to simply appreciate life.  This is so well written and I am grateful to you for sharing this with the rest of us.

Shenachie

Nan
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5 posted 2004-03-13 11:09 AM


A creative ode indeed... Gotta love abnormalcy, don'tcha??
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