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Ruiz--A Monorhyme
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA 
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Ruiz Is far too eager to please, Unwilling to do the mental striptease And face the chill of a rejection deep-freeze. Ruiz Is unwilling to create unease. In writing, he prefers to appease And express those words that give the heart ease. Ruiz Hates to express what he foresees And usually writes so the reader agrees. Alas, his writing sounds like legalese. Shenachie 11 August 2003 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would have been here last night but I got slapped with that silly virus... Enjoyed this Very much, Schenachie! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I'm sorry, I'm lost with this one Bridget. who is Ruiz? A famous American writer/poet? I have no idea! LOL However, I do know how hard it is to write a poem with only the same end rhyme and you did a great job.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ... This poem wants me to break into song..."Lou-ise"... |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Sunshine--Thank you for reading and the kind response. Munda--Ruiz is no one in particular. It was simply a name that rhymed. In this case, Ruiz is simply the personification of any writer that struggles with these writing difficulties. Nan--Thanks for the fresh breeze of your kind comment. |
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