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Relationships--A Tyburn

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

0 posted 2003-08-11 11:12 PM

Relationships—A Tyburn

Negate.
Irate.
Placate.
Relate.
Result of harsh negate--irate friend.
Much better to placate—relate, then.

Shenachie
11 August 2003

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

1 posted 2003-08-13 05:49 PM

Mphm, it a puzzle and a miracle if you can solve it! I think I may skip the Tyburn, but you, Bridget, did very well!

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-08-14 08:41 PM

Bridget
You have chosen a complex subject for any poetry form, compacted into just a few words a clarity that is hard to find in much longer poems...and to be restricted by this set form, I am sure, made it all the harder...excellent work.....ice

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-08-24 09:38 AM

It looks to me like you've succeeded nicely, Bridget - I like it - You're such a good sport - There's nothing you won't try on for size, is there??...

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-08-24 09:44 AM

Shenachie will try most anything...

Ok, Bridget, ain't going to say I told you so...

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

5 posted 2003-08-26 05:06 PM

Thanks to all of you for the kind remarks.

Shenachie

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