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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2003-04-22 04:40 PM


To make a poem like This just go like thaT
Hold tightly to your Hat and then say "duH"
Right down the left and Right let's make this cleaR
Easy as pie you Eat except for thE
End may surprise you Each and every timE
For you might lose your Footing on the wharF
Or find there is yet One more way to gO
Roll on like old man River out the dooR
Kay Jay so now you Know I am a kooK
And that for me it's All a joke ha-hA
You see I get my Yucks or as they saY
Jolly good show there "Joe" backwards is "eoJ"
And thanks again though All chance for an "A"
You know by now I've "Yucked" up all the waY

© Copyright 2003 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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1 posted 2003-04-24 01:52 AM


Quite creative....a lot better than what I've done....I can't even get one of these little beauties begun!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Nan
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2 posted 2003-05-13 07:24 AM


... I've read this at least three times, Doc - each time trying to come up with a witty poetic retort... I thought I'd best let you know I'm not ignoring you, ya know?... This double acrostic is great - and I'm a poetic nerd, I guess...
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3 posted 2003-05-13 10:24 AM


Doc~
I see ALL THREE ACROSTICS !!!

You are hereby promoted to the sonnet section~
(Let me sit next to you so I can copy)

Nobody else did a triple, did they ???????
TEACHER !  He deserves an A+++++++++++++ !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2003-05-14 06:05 PM


Justbleu,
Thanks, sorry for the delay in replying, I'm glad you liked.
Doc

Nan,
Did you say "Double"? OOps, I think you "May" have lost count! Thanks !
Doc

Marge,
No, my dear, it is you who should go to the head of the class.
Doc

kayjay
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5 posted 2003-05-15 07:38 PM


Holy cow!!  After opening my big mouth, I wrestled with this thing and "tabled the motion".  Great job!!  
And thank you very much for the mention!  lol
Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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6 posted 2003-05-17 01:07 PM


Tee-Hee-Hee !  Teacher said
quote:
I'm a poetic nerd, I guess
Tee-Hee-Hee ! GUESS ?  LOL LOL LOL !

(Dang, wishing I had a 'secret identity' to post this under ...
may be NEEDING one soon !)

You go, Doc !!!
(Psssssst, let me COPY !)
My da-dum is on the fritz !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2003-05-18 05:15 PM


WEll. blow me down!
A triple accrostic!
Never have seen such a beast
and never knew it was in the realm of possibilities
I can't even do a double
Then to put in in sonnet form
WOW!Kind of makes my head spin
Applause to you, DR. Moose
BRAVO!
Liz

Nan
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8 posted 2003-05-19 01:43 PM


Hmmmm - Didn't we say THREE OH ONE?..

Did Doc think we said THREE IN ONE???...

Bravo INDEED

blueyedlioness
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9 posted 2003-05-21 01:44 PM


Woah... I didn't know there was such a thing as, um, that.

Okay, I'm impressed. I gotta try this...


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