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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2003-02-24 05:18 PM


When two
times two's not four,
and three times two's not six.
Don't hesitate to concentrate
three in a bed's the perfect fix!
A lesson is in store.
He shoots, he scores,
hat tricks!

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1 posted 2003-02-24 08:21 PM


Woo-hoo! You are a naughty man! And what a perfect subject for a pair of cinquain.......!

Are you going to put this one over in Reflections?

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Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2003-02-24 08:56 PM


Ratleader,
Thanks, as I said, I'll work on these as time allows, next... on to the octomathingy!
Doc
P.S. Thanks for the brain stretch this month
(it felt as if things were getting a little "backed up" in there, thought I might have to call a plumber!)
Doc

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3 posted 2003-02-24 11:07 PM


Ooh, Thoughtstipation, a danger to us all....

Happy hunting!

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4 posted 2003-03-01 02:48 PM


Two times
Two's four - twice prime
And two times three is six
While adding only to the mix
Two rhymes

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