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Cinquain ( Workout ) |
Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Cinquain “ Workout “ By Paul Wilson Workout Getting in shape Running a marathon Dedication is what it takes Sweating "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That, Sir qualifies well a cinquain in motion efforts of the mind and body as one |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well done: Strong central theme, movement, feeling and growth, powerful finish. You're off and running! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (02-19-2003 05:48 PM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Shape up Exercising Mind and body in tune Yields a far healthier life style Step up |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Nan~ Thanks for the " Cinquain " reply...Paul Thank you For all you do Un-selflishly giving Of your time and experience Grateful "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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