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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-11-20 09:38 PM

Soul Mates

[Terza Rima]

Accident’s meeting could well mean mishap:
But fortune’s accident, lovers might vote,
To fall fair in love, a life’s long sweet trap.

So tender, his charming heart, that she wrote
Pleasant dreams as if she might, could foretell,
’twas evidenced in her several notes.

For her lover she prized ever so well
And she his woman, his soul’s very mate
That he would follow her straight into hell

If she would but let him past hell’s grave gate
That he would trail his missing, lovely wife
His greatest fear, he would arrive too late

For one sets up their own sorrow and strife
Forgetting to give it to God, and go
Thus the barriers we may face in life

But his soul’s mate, oh he would again know
Fortune’s accident, loves soul mates in glow.

~*~

Inspired by:What Dreams May Come

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-11-21 06:14 AM

Very well done my friend.

Your making this look to easy.
*grumbles knowing that now I just have
to try another one of these*
It's a challenge indeed.

"When we're torn apart,
shattered and scarred,
love has the grace to save us"
Saints and Angels as sung by Sarah Evans

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

2 posted 2002-11-21 12:10 PM

Sunshine--

Great write!

Your terza rimas are starting to flow. And you said that you were having difficulty...
yeah, yeah yeah. Kudos, my friend. I'm not sure that I am up to the challenge of another one. Mulling it over...

Shenachie

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2002-11-23 02:20 PM

Sunshine, another beauty you penned here.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2002-12-01 09:02 AM

This is lovely - What a wonderful story in Terza Rima you weave... To be in love - is really all any of us really wants, isn't it?.. Hoping we're not too late indeed...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2002-12-02 01:09 AM

You know..I LOVE Robin Williams, and I ADORED that movie. I'm glad I wandered in here to see what a Terza Rima was (still not sure). Anyways..this is prolly the place for critiques on the styles, but I just like the subject matter and the inspiration.

~~I Love You~~

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