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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Hidden [Terza Rima] Somewhere, hidden deep in blackest archive A treasured chest of words in blessed blend Somewhere, hidden deep, where they, alive, Comforting with truth, mayhap love, portend Where I shall win my rest and nightly ease, Neither nightmare nor concern shall contend Whereby this heart be held lone in love’s seize Where this mind be bent in blessed relief Where worries art cast to far away breeze I pray that the dark skies shall not be brief But long bathe in your words among the sheets Allowing salt soak of past tears base grief Below, Crier sings as he walks the streets Calling out that all is well, all is well My weep a silent, lone, and somber beat Somewhere, hidden deep, is my love’s sweet swell Somewhere, hidden deep, peels my mourning bell |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Sunshine! This is such a beautiful terza rima of love soothing sorrow written in perfect pentameter. Your subject matter pours from your very soul. Thank you for your lovely poem. It reflects your beautiful spirit. Shenachie |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
As usual you shine girl, but of course I didn't expect any less.  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW some terza rima you wrote here!!  Like your pic, hello Sunshine Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunshine~ Enjoyed very much...Paul Thanks for all the help. [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (11-24-2002 03:46 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hidden deeply or not... The mourning bell yet tolls... This is very nicely done, Sunshine. A theme well developed, as always..  |
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