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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-09-08 06:47 AM





Dear Mr. President – Have a Cookie

a week ago a friend did
what a friend does – a favor

when asked how best I could
repay, he said “I like chocolate
chip cookies!”

I put it on my “to do” list

two days ago I picked up
ingredients for
chocolate chip cookies

yesterday, our nation was
attacked

war is imminent

people need blood
families need prayers
the country needs unity
children need reassurance
calm needs to permeate
and level heads, preside

and grief will come, later
tears will come, later

faith needs to be now
courage needs to be now
belief needs to reign supreme
in our country
ourselves
our President

Dear Mr. President

this morning I awoke
grateful

today I talked with people
who hope you do the right
thing

this afternoon, I kept tabs
on you, and yours,
awaiting your words

tonight I passed soccer fields,
parents are with children
giving support in a tomorrow
to come

Dear Mr. President

tonight I shall bake cookies
for the tomorrows
that shall be

in this, I have faith
in you and yours
in our country and it’s
desire to remain free
in the fact that we can come
together as one

I believe.

Here, Mr. President. Have a cookie.

12 September 2001

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-09-08 12:30 PM


Given my memory, it's amazing that I remember this poem.  Seems my memory of that week and the weekend preceeding it (which I'd spent blissfully camping) are very clear.  Glad ya reposted this.  It really doesn't seem like a year, then again...seems like a thousand.      
Tammy Blessing
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since 2002-08-26
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2 posted 2002-09-09 03:19 PM


I think our President may just have deserved that cookie. And yes, the tears for some came later, but they still flow freely today. Thanks for posting this. And...

tonight I shall bake cookies
for the tomorrows
that shall be

Baking pan in hand....
Tammy

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
3 posted 2002-09-16 10:09 PM


What a day, Karilea...
Who will ever forget it...Did you ever bake those cookies... and did he appreciate them?
I love the poem and I love chocolate chip cookies too!
~ chocolate chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056
Kansas USA
4 posted 2002-09-25 11:32 PM


Ah Karilea, I remember this poem and I remember the days of which you write.  We were all struggling with moving forward...you wrote this so well.

Shenachie

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since 1999-11-03
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Oklahoma, USA
5 posted 2002-09-26 10:03 AM


I missed this the first time around. Thanks for reposting. We all needed that cookie then and still do today. Besides, chocolate chips are my favorite anyway.

Thanks,
Pete

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-09-26 05:22 PM



Thanks everyone.  It is difficult for me to be hard on a person who was voted [or chadded] into a position and whom, I believe, is doing the best he can, despite everything.  I think this poem is as relevant now as it was a year ago...and the President could go by any name...all Presidents [for the most part] need the support of the country...

now, as to the poem, what? No one is going to tear it apart and tell me how to improve upon it?


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-26-2002 05:24 PM).]

Nan
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7 posted 2002-10-02 03:07 PM


I loved it then - I loved it now - Let's give him some milk with those cookies too - He's more than earned them, don't ya think?..
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