Shuffled Last Stanza of Paradelle for Nan

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Shuffled Last Stanza of Paradelle for Nan

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-07-14 11:15 AM

New Forms Of Poetry

To attempt each form of poetry
To attempt each form of poetry
I will try to write at least once
I will try to write at least once
Of each form I will attempt to
To write at least once of poetry

Even though it may be hard
Even though it may be hard
I will still try to write
I will still try to write
Though it may be hard
Even still I will try to write

No fear do I have of trying
No fear do I have of trying
To learn new forms of poetry
To learn new forms of poetry
Of new poetry forms do I have
No fear of trying to learn

To attempt each form of poetry
I will try to write at least once
Even though it may be hard
I will still try to write
No fear do I have of trying
To learn new forms of poetry

Trying to write each form
Of poetry I have no fear
Be it hard I still try new forms
Even though of poetry will I
Attempt to write at least once
May try to do of will to learn

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

1 posted 2002-07-14 10:46 PM

Wow, Sue! I'm still trying to write my first draft. So far, I've written gibberish and may have to post the nonsense. Your poem makes great sense. That isn't easy with the paradelle form (as I'm now learning.)

Shenachie

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2002-07-15 05:19 AM

You go, gal!

i trust there will be more paradelles in store for us??

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2002-07-25 10:25 AM

All righty Sue - You're getting it - and, by the way - This is one VERY difficult poetic format. You've nearly got it.

What I found when I read this one word by word, is that the final two lines of your first stanza contain an extra "OF" and also seem to be missing the word "TRY."

The rest falls into place nicely... YIPPEE..

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