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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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(Ok! I messed up real bad on the first one. Hopefully, this is a better one.) Flowers start to bloom in the spring Tulips are my favorite flowers The leaves on the trees will turn green Flowers start to bloom in the spring The birds will also start to sing Their sweet melody for hours Flowers start to bloom in the spring Tulips are my favorite flowers By Sue 2-23-02 |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, this looks more like a triolet... You've got your line repetitions in sync, and your theme flows... You've taken a little poetic license to rhyme 'spring' with 'green'...  .. It works.. Mucho better, Sue..  |
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