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Saying Goodbye - Rictameter

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-03-21 09:07 AM

Raining
It seemed so right
Waving “goodbye winter”
Welcoming spring with open arms
Then someone sent me sweet honeysuckle
In its brilliant yellow and red
I saw your face, my friend
And it won’t stop
Raining

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-03-22 10:16 AM

Karilea~

LOVELY !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2003-03-23 10:52 PM

Very nice, Karilea.

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-24 10:04 AM

This must be for Lyra. How very lovely. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2003-03-24 03:48 PM

Karilea,
I like everything about this. Everything, from shape... to ... message. Excellent.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

5 posted 2003-03-24 11:56 PM

Karilea,

You describe the spirit of Lyra in your writing so well and this is especially nice. I miss her, too.

Shenachie

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-03-25 01:51 AM

Sunny One.....I really like this a lot!!!!!!

Bridgette

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-03-30 10:54 AM

Raining
Replenishment
For desiccated soils
Cathartic flow of waterfalls
Resurgent spectacle for all beneath
When Sunshine's grand luminescence
Casts glorious rainbows
Halo above
Raining

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