Boomer ang (apologies to vlraynes!)

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Boomer ang (apologies to vlraynes!)

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Member Rara Avis

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0 posted 2003-03-19 05:43 PM

Sorry in advance, all! Vlraynes comment about Death By Crow started me thinking about syllables, and once I've asked the gravitous question, "what if?" I can't let it alone until I find out!

Boomer ang

Boomer
ang wheeling her
ky-jerky arounda
bout the field, misses the ima
ginary bird, still near level, then ris
ing, turning back, losing moment
um, falls at my feet. Won
derful flight, boom
erang!

Cheer up though -- my last "what if" was whether a sonnet really needed fourteen lines: /pip/Forum76/HTML/003248.html

Now I'm going to break another rule and cross post this to Open.....!

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1 posted 2003-03-19 07:44 PM

You haven't broken a rule yet, when you cross-post to Open, Ed...from here, to there...
it's allowed...
so why do I get the feeling you're pulling my leg?

As for this?

Quite clever,
quite imaginative...
and quite ornery...

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2 posted 2003-03-19 07:54 PM

Pulling
Sunshine's leg is
more fun than married guys
and even some single guys are
allowed...!

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Marge Tindal

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3 posted 2003-03-21 06:04 PM

This is REALLY neat !
TrickyVicky will think so too~
*Huglets*
~*Marage*~

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Bridget Shenachie
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4 posted 2003-03-24 11:45 PM

Enjoyed the write! You giving 'wise guy' lessons? I could use the smarts.

Shenachie

Nan

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5 posted 2003-03-27 11:01 AM

Boomer
Ang goes back a
Round to where it once be
Gan to fly circles on the play
Ground never ever ending in a touch
Down where poets could toss it a
Gain it was surely a
Verse 'til bell rang
Boomer

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6 posted 2003-03-27 09:56 PM

Woo, very nice! Go, Nan!

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