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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Rhopalic Madness~ me... I bravely meet challenge happily to compose rhopalics successfully wedge verses following complicated methodology prove very cerebral...difficulty initiating irritability now seeking simplistic literature alleviating uncharacteristic hypersensitivity yet finding refreshing tranquility ineffectual idealogically am seeing competent psychologist professionally a speedy remedy necessary for mental sanity of crazy me... ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Good Heaven's girl ... Sending a large supply of EXCEDRIN right away ! I'll have to give you credit, gal~ Challenges-R-You  Nice job, girlie~ Not enough EXCEDRIN in the state for this one~ LOL ! Well, at least not today ! *I see that muse found her poet ...  Or did the teacher threaten to make you clean erasers ????? Just being  , I am !You'll have everyone scratching their muses heads after this piece~ Tee-Hee ... that teacher cracks a mean quip ! Love ya', little MissShowOffSmartiePantsBrownNoser !  ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW, but now I'm really confused. You used one word, two words, three words and so on in each following line, but Nan spoke of syllables, is that the same? Really need my Webster (sigh) before I myself give it a try Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very kewl indeed - we should give this one a new name... I like it and Titia - this wasn't part of the plan - but it works.. um... how about doing one in Dutch?..  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- ROFL @ you!! LOL You crack me up, my silly friend!  Ms. Nan! Margie's callin' me names! She said I was a little MissShowOffSmartiePantsBrownNoser, but I'm not...ummmmmm...LITTLE!! Yeah...that's it! Make her take it back, Ms. Nan!  As for you, little Miss Margie...you bully, you... I'll see YOU on the playground!!... right after I finish cleaning the rest of the erasers, and go pick some apples for Ms. Nan...  Oh, and about that EXCEDRIN...make it Maximum Strength!! LOL Love ya, my friend,~'Biggerthanyou'MissShowOffSmartiePantsBrownNoser...a.k.a. ~Me Titia- Sorry if I made it more confusing for you. Yes...each word in a line should have one more syllable than the previous word, and I've done that. As far as using one more word in each line than the previous line, that was just the way I chose to do it. You don't have to do it the same way. I hope that explains it a little bit. Thanks so much for your comments. Hugs, ~vicky Nan- Glad to know this works, and that you find it 'kewl'.. So, since you spoke of renaming this one, what do you have in mind for a title? Really glad you like it, my friend. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Well ! I'll meet ya' on the playground - and you'd better bring your lunch ... gonna be an all-day job getting me to write one of these.  MizNanners~ She IS a showoff ! AND she IS a smartie pants ! AND she IS a brown-noser ! AND an APPLE-POLISHER too ! *Marge *sulking* by the boys locker room~  I have a name for her alright ! !  LittleBartFlossom Na-Na-Na-Na-Nah-Na ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
MizNanners likes me best! *sticks out tongue and runs to hide behind MizNanners' skirt* *tells MizNanners what a pretty skirt it is* I'll bring a lunch alright, but don't expect me to share my Twinkie with you! You're just a big ol' meanie!  Nannynannybooboo!! ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I think somebody's getting POLISHED !  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Hey, Margie...if'n ya share one of your apples with me, I'll be your best friend I'll even throw in a bite of my Twinkie! *big cheesy grin* ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
You two are really nuts!!! Vicky I think you have shown us all up on this one...I'm afraid the class will laugh at mine! Oh well, you have always been the teachers pet! Shame on you margie for calling my friend names!!! *mean bully look* Don't worry Vicky I'll protect you on the playground! By the way, I'd like a bite of that twinkie! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
viraynes , After much careful study of your excellent piece , subjected to diaphonous tests ( to which only moose are privy to ). I must here-by proclaim , and surrender unto you , the title of " Viraynes the Wedgeworthy " Doc |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There'll be absolutely NO name-calling here - and NO food in class either - NOT UNLESS I get some too.... Where are those twinkies?... We have a boys' locker room? How come I didn't know that???... Geesh..  How about Rhopalic Raynes...  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
cindi- I am NOT the teacher's pet! Take it back! But isn't she such a nice teacher... I promise to NEVER laugh at your homework, as long as you keep protecting me from that mean ol' MargieGirl...deal? Seriously...I saw your homework, and you deserve an apple too...and maybe even a twinkie! Hugs to you  Doc- Wow! I don't know what to say...I have no speech prepared, and there are so many people I need to thank! First of all, I'd like to thank MizNanners for being such a smart teacher, and for letting me dust the erasers for her...and then there's Margie...even though she IS a bully, she's fun to play with sometimes, and once in awhile she even checks over my homework for me. Oh my...I just know I'm going to forget someone, so I'll just say thank you to EVERYONE...I couldn't have done it without your support...this title belongs to YOU! *taking my victory walk*  *beauty queen wave*Thank you, Dr. Moose. I truly appreciate your kind words. Nan- I tried to tell Margie to be good, but she just wouldn't listen to me. I told her that you were the bestest teacher in the whole whole world, and that she needed to respect you and listen to you, and she just stuck her tongue out at me and made me cry and I didn't even do anything to her! Here MizNanners...I brought you a whole box of Twinkies. Hmmmmmmmm...'Rhopalic Raynes',huh? I kinda like that...has a nice ring to it. hugs to all of you, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeez, Vicky~ Here's your classroom supplies so you can CONTINUE to suck up to the teacher~  And this one should really have a picture of Mickey Mouse on it ... You are SO obvious~ Harumph !   You're gonna need 'em ... she ain't THAT easy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Cool!! These are the fun, bendy kind... for added flexibility in sucking up! That was sooooo thoughtful of you!! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I needed a laugh and you two just made my day  Thank you guys A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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