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cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

0 posted 2001-08-09 12:44 PM


clouds
i'm begging
please bestow bounteous precipitation
therefore concecrate Arizona
we endure igneous phenomenons
causing desperate conditioning
Im pleading desperately!
motivating
a cooling tendency seriously inaccessible
but truely acceptable
need rainfall splattering immoderately
come quickly facilitate equanimity
bring AZ harmony, tranquility
peacefulness, serenity
I'm begging
drop water!

Cpalmer August 8, 2001



God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

[This message has been edited by cpalmer (edited 08-09-2001).]

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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
1 posted 2001-08-09 03:14 AM


WOW Cindy you did it!!!

I'm still working on one  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2001-08-09 10:45 AM


Awesome... Will this do ya?

Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 2001-08-10 12:07 PM


*chortles*
These are amusing.  Yours isn't any exception.

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
4 posted 2001-08-10 04:56 PM


You were successful! Great poem!
You inspire me to try again
Very well done
Liz

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
5 posted 2001-08-10 08:01 PM



cindi-
   You did a great job on this!  
   Love it!
   Now, where IS that rain?!

   Hugs,
   ~Me


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
6 posted 2001-08-11 12:40 PM


Titia,
Thank you, I enjoyed looking up and learning new words, it was fun!
Cindi


Nan,
Thanks teach! I appreciate the rain cloud!
Cindi


Allan,
Thank you, I'm glad you could get a chuckle out of it...LOL...It was lots of fun and very challenging!


Elizabeth,
Thanks, I thought yours was very good too! I just haven't responded to it yet sorry! My bad!  It was a challenge but alot of fun ti find new words!
Hugs
Cindi


Vicky
Thank you so much dear! I have NO idea where the rain is! It keeps just going around us huh? Or it sneaks in, in the middle of the night...so not fair...can't wait for winter! LOL
Cindi



Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-08-11 01:21 AM


Cindi~
This is outstanding~
Way to go gal !

And ... that rain is here in Florida by the barrel !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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Phoenix, Az
8 posted 2001-08-12 12:48 PM


Marge,
thank you!
hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA
9 posted 2001-08-13 08:11 PM


cpalmer ,
Don't know how this one slipped by me . Excellent . Hope you get some liquid relief soon .
Doc

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
10 posted 2001-08-13 08:24 PM


Hey doc!
The clouds just keep right around us here!  I just happen to be in the wrong place I guess! LOL  oh well, glad you liked it!
Cindi

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