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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Deep asleep, angels creep in shadows deep as soft moonglows leap upon the wings that sweep you into their fold,to keep you safely in the realm of sleep, all the dreams of joy to fondly reap where you will never more in silence weep Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-09-2001).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And we have yet another interpretation... I like this, Liz.. Very neat indeed... You've not only increased each line by a syllable over the last, you've even rhymed..!!.. I like it, I like it..  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
That's beautiful Liz, Oh wow, like your form. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THank you ladies for your comments I got the form down, but personally this has got to be one of my worst attemts at poetry. THis assignment was really tough for me. I'll have to try again Off to read others! Liz |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Elizabeth- This is awesome! I love what you've done with it! Great job! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice work... this looks like it would have been difficult to do. You did it though. And look, it makes sense. The children of the nobility are playing here. they look up at you with disgust as you come near. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LizzieLove~ Me likeum~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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