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' Hoping For A Kiss "

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2001-02-13 06:33 PM

Cast petals to a loving breeze
beseech its' source , pray tell me please
will favor of this one be found ?
Forever , hopes deny the ground .

For they are born of diff'rent worlds ,
aloft one o'er the other swirls
as hearts are freed from earthly cares .
The stuff of dreams , in which to share

brief moments , weight-less , thoughts adrift
propelled to wonder of the lift
to spirit , loving breeze affords ,
un-grounded , here , our fears ignored .

Cast petals to a loving breeze .
Beseech its' source , pray tell me please .
Two worlds apart , consider this ,
to be re-joined within a kiss .

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-02-14 04:55 AM

Doc,
what stunning imagery! You make it look so easy.
write on
Kethry.

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

2 posted 2001-02-14 10:23 AM

I'm sorry Doc, again there's nothing else to say than I love it...

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

3 posted 2001-02-14 02:29 PM

This is written so well! I really like the last two lines especially! Very nice.

Debbie

Suzanne Arlene
Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-02-14 08:45 PM

That was just so sweet .Well done Doc

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

5 posted 2001-02-21 01:49 AM

Mmm.. what can I say?

A dreamy poem.. deserves a sigh, and a round of applause..

Loved it.. perfect for Valentines day, yes..

Luv,
Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

Dr.Moose1
Member Elite

since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

6 posted 2001-02-22 03:39 PM

Kethry , Munda ,Romy ,Suzanne and Yu Lan ,

My thanks to you all , hope yours was an enjoyable Valentine's Day .
Doc

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2001-02-26 09:00 PM

Hey Doc... What Munda said... She's a smart lady!!

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