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Nan
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0 posted 2001-02-06 08:09 PM


Valentine's Day brings out the best in a poet, don't you think?... What better theme for writing in February than LOVE...???

Let's do this... Choose your own style for this poem. If you want to write in formatted (sonnet, pantoum, villanelle, etc.) or free verse, it's your choice.. But you've gotta use some imagery..

So - What's imagery? Imagery is simply the use of figurative language in your writing... The following is an excerpt from a previous workshop where we described the most commonly used basic forms:....
quote:

Simile - A comparison using as or like. Check out Ron's Tormented Love - Triumphant Hate and see if you can find one. - Yep - "like lemmings led to our own fall" (ROFTL - I had to look it up too!! - I love it when that happens).

Metaphor - A comparison that doesn't use "as" or "like", but rather uses one idea to represent another. Munda's Walk With Me is a good example of a metaphor. Life is not a path, but this poem makes it one - without using "as" or "like".

Extended Metaphor - This involves the entire poem in a metaphorical comparison. Read XAngel's On Closing Old Doors and you'll see how she uses the old doors in the poem to represent incomplete issues in her life, and she does it nicely.

Personification - Is giving the attributes of life to an inanimate entity. Snow in Summer does a very nice job in her untitled poem. She's got "pumpkins perching on the porch" and "plumply slumbering" (and more). This is also Alliteration, btw - that's repeated syllable sounds for a great effect.



Those are the basics... Let's see what we can put together here... Our Theme is LOVE...

We're going to incorporate some Imagery...

Our format is optional...

Should be easy, eh?... Well - effective use of imagery can be quite a challenge...

Just remember....

Writing a simile is as easy as pie..
but
Writing a metaphor is a piece of cake..!!


Off to the drawing board...um... journal...
...and my double acrostic palindrome is almost done... Who assigned that anyway...???

Doreen... I expect at least ten poems from you...


Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.






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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-02-07 06:47 AM


Nan,
do you mean my love is like a red,red, rose type of imagery or more love is a many splendored thing type. Or is the choice up to me. This is so hard!
First a topic I don't understand, then a way to do it that I can't. Still going to try. with the Doc and Krawdad letting me cheat oops helping me it should be passable.Still I am so glad my name's not doreen.
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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2 posted 2001-02-08 09:00 PM


And you can count me in, please.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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