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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
How do i find you Easy it is not Love quickly dies Patience soon forgot My soul is calling Ease this painful loss Point me the way Love is being tossed Every way but home Anguishing my heart Silence these fears End before they start Very first one i ever wrote. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suzanne~ Excellent ! You've seemingly got the knack - we'll expect to see more, more, more ! !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Suzanne, Very VERY! well done. If this is your first it seems you do have a knack. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Suzanne, You did a nice job on your very first acrostic! So what do you say, will there be more in the future? |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Well thank you all for the encouraging words. Yes i may try another one.It wasn't as scary as i first anticipated.And i did get threw this one.Barely but threw lol Thank you all again. Your kind support helps alot. Suzanne |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I hope my first one is half as beautiful as this! A beautiful start!"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is wonderful Suzanne! Please do write another one.  |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
This is your first? wouldn't have known. Well done. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You're right - They're not so scary when you get into the writing mode... Now that you've done such a good job on this one (and your theme is quite an emotional one - well expressed)... Try a DOUBLE?...  |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Thank you nan . I did try another one and i brought it back up so you could see it ok |
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