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Suzanne Arlene
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0 posted 2001-01-11 07:13 PM



Sparkling shivering snowflakeS
Numbingly notwithstanding nyloN
Outerwear openly overthrows ontO
Wintery whipped windoW
Yearning youthful yesterdaY

Drawing delightfully dreameD
Apparitions amplifying agendA
Yes yes youthful yesterdaY


I sure do hope this makes sense.
1st attempt at this type.It was interesting Vverryyyy intersting lol


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Krawdad
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1 posted 2001-01-12 02:23 AM


WAOH!  This is a QUAD acrostic.  My word!  I'M impressed!
But dang, I thought I had a shot at this.  Well, I suppose somebody has to be at the bottom of the curve.
(Are you the teacher's kid?)

Krawdad

Romy
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2 posted 2001-01-12 09:49 AM


Suzanne,
This is very creative!  I love the way you wrote this!  
These are fun to write aren't they?

Suzanne Arlene
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3 posted 2001-01-12 01:03 PM


LOL   No Krawdad i am not the teachers pet But gee if the postion is open  pick me .I had no idea what this was called when i wrote it I just came up with the middle parts myself.That is why i was wondering if it made sense. I think i should have called it california dreamin LOL  Then it would have made   sense  .And yes Debbie  they are fun to do  A real brain challenge.Which my wintery sleepy brain could use a jump start.
When oh when will spring come.*sigh* Thank you all for your kind responses.   Suzanne

Gene
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4 posted 2001-01-12 02:51 PM


Great concept...I can't even come up with a decent single acrostic. Hey, no fair, extra credit doesn't count.  

~Gene

Munda
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5 posted 2001-01-12 06:09 PM


I can only hope I do half as good on my acrostic!
Kethry
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6 posted 2001-01-13 09:28 PM


Suzanne,
a double acrostic and alliteration. Wow! I am impressed!
write on
Kethry


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7 posted 2001-01-14 01:53 AM


Suzanne~
An Alliterated Quadcrostic -
What are you - a genius or something ?
Very impressed, I am.
I think this deserves an A+ !
Brilliantly done.
~*Marge*~



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Suzanne Arlene
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8 posted 2001-01-14 10:39 AM


WoW  is that what this is   an Alliterated Quadcrostic.I had no idea. I am not a genius  but i am a mom lol  Does that count.
I was terrible in English class and we did not do much on poetry. I just wrote birthday cards for the family.I never even read that many poems other than Dr Suess whom i still love  lol .A year ago i started to write and then i found this site and i liked the poems ,the people and i love the poetry workshop. It has definetley opened doors for me.But if it is a Quadrostic  could you define what makes it this.I have no idea.
Thank you Suzanne

Dr.Moose1
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9 posted 2001-01-14 11:04 AM


Suzanne ,
Now you've got me seeing double/double ! Nice job !
Doc

Suzanne Arlene
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10 posted 2001-01-29 03:23 PM


This is what i tried next nan
Nan
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11 posted 2001-01-29 08:29 PM


So... Quatracrostics are good... After all, I did say to use your imagination, didn't I??.. I like this one.. except for the Snowy Day part... I need some warmth and sunshine here... and as for being my kid..??.. I'll ask Stacie & Sandy if they need a sister - They're pretty cool about such things..
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