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Krawdad
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0 posted 2001-01-09 09:09 PM


(feeble I know, but hey, ya gotta start somewhere)

Funny how
It comes now
Remembering
Something
Terrorizing

Tested, tested
Educated?
Schools not out?
Total pout.


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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-01-09 11:16 PM


Krawdad,
this is very, good.
Loved how you put it together!
Kethry


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Romy
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2 posted 2001-01-10 07:37 AM


I liked it too! Cute message!
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3 posted 2001-01-10 02:05 PM


Krawdad~
Nice show !
Can we go out on the playground yet ? ?
~*Marge*~


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Krawdad
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4 posted 2001-01-10 03:09 PM


Kethry, Debbie, Marge,
Thank ya' all for the read and comments.
I'm working at a "double trouble".  I think I picked the wrong word, but I'z stubborn!!

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5 posted 2001-01-11 05:25 PM


This is a cute message and a wonderful start. I'm new to acrostics, also! Great debut, my friend!  

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Munda
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6 posted 2001-01-12 05:43 PM


A great first test it is! Lets see the next! (Retutning to the corner trying to write something)
Gene
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7 posted 2001-01-12 11:25 PM


Not feeble...great first one.  

~Gene

Krawdad
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8 posted 2001-01-13 02:32 AM


LoveBug, Munda, u_gene,
Thanks for your support!
I stepped into it again . . . "Doubled Trouble" is coming up.

Nan
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9 posted 2001-01-28 07:58 AM


I wish it were out too.. But I always seem to have so many Double Trouble Makers to deal with... Looks like I'm inheriting more... *sigh*...

This is a terrific start, btw..

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